Sunday, February 26, 2006

This Probaby Too Ambitious New Start Comments

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I’ll spend the day engrossed in painting
Incredible things that are to come
It’s a future I’m creating
What do the swirls of paint become?
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Lea Simpson
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Gina Onyemaechi 26 February 2006

An enrapturing set of words, Lea. Are you referring to the start of a new relationship with somebody? Well, even if I've missed the poem's point, I still love it. The imagery, the wording, the rhyme, fantastic. And of course allusions to paintiings in poems really work for me as poetry is painting in words. Yours certainly is. Warm regards from your latest fan, Gina. Oh yeah, carry my 10.

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