This Point In Time Comments

The same blue as the sea and the skies...................... the legacy of love all ruffle in blue eyes raves up by the setting sun by the side whisper mellows by the dust of twilight.................wonderful appreciation of moment when luscious green, well penned.10+, thanks for shring

There is a lovely rhythm to this poem, and vivid imagery too. F

the refrain is very touching.... with vivd imagery..

Stay there i will join you, that was such a nice write Rani 10 Chris