This Poem Short And Brief Poem by Shaun Cronick

This Poem Short And Brief

Rating: 5.0


It's so difficult to think,
When weather is too hot.
Usually I'm never fazed,
A poem I can quickly jot.

But the sun is unforgiving,
And a temperature to match.
My imagination's drying up,
My head I begin to scratch.

We need a bit of rain,
To clear this humid air.
And I always look to hope,
Never dwell on dark despair.

And as the sun goes down,
I get some welcomed relief.
A cooling chance to write,
This poem short and brief.

Wednesday, August 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: headache,sun,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dominic Windram 13 August 2020

And a fine poem it is is good sir, you are so right not to dwell on dark despair, live your life without a care, and look for beauty rich and rare. It's a temperature rising ten from me!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 August 2020

A well expressed poem that we can relate to. So very true. Great weather can induce our mind to think better. Beautifully crafted with great rhyme and a tinge of humor. Loved reading it.10+++

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Soran M. H 12 August 2020

And as the sun goes down, I get some welcomed relief. A cooling chance to write, This poem short and brief.

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Soran M. H 12 August 2020

Hello dear Shaun, Well done for this cool gift in this hot weather, it is so well rhymed and perfect described the impact of the weather, but I don't know how I can save some heat for the cold winter? but in the end this is the human nature which is so weak, that is why we can feel only relief inside some poems such as Shaun's poems, nice to hear from you after long absence, have a big 10+ and onto my fav list

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