Thursday, June 19, 2014

This Poem Is Not For You Comments

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This poem is not for you
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There are many poems
Full of pathos
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Chinedu Dike 01 August 2021

Well conceived and nicely brought forth with conviction.....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2017

The title of this piece is one of a kind, an eye catcher that pulls a reader to go through. This poem is thought provoking, beautifully crafted that leaves one to linger on.

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Bharati Nayak 02 May 2015

And time speechless After sweeping up the heart What remains? - - - - - - - - - - - -Some poems may leave us speechless.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 November 2014

Best fits to you, Thanks. I like it.

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Patricia Grantham 08 November 2014

A very good write. Enjoyed the lightness of it. Sweet.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 04 November 2014

Many many thanks......Roseann......I am humbled

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Roseann Shawiak 04 November 2014

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem, and particularly enjoyed the last line. Explains life, love, emotions - spells it all out then you say: Better select one That best fits to you Since this poem is not for you. I love it! Great poem! ! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur 30 August 2014

A thoughtful poem searching the state of mind of the individual with a statement.. Thanks for sharing

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 16 August 2014

lovely work poet, a delight to read.

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Salini Nair 02 July 2014

And time speechless After sweeping up the heart................like it

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Neela Nath Das 28 June 2014

A beautiful poem......................

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Lyn Paul 27 June 2014

The title drew me right in. I loved your words. Thank You

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Dinesan Madathil 25 June 2014

I thought this poem was only for some of us but have now found that this was for all of us, Patnaikji.

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Dinesan Madathil 25 June 2014

I thought this poem was only for some of us but have now found that this was for all of us, Patnaikji.

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Dinesan Madathil 25 June 2014

I thought this poem was only for some of us but have now found that this was for all of us, Patnaikji.

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Valsa George 25 June 2014

'If you don't come'...... the fear lingers...! But if the waiting goes till eternity, there is hope of an awaited union! Enjoyed!

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Valsa George 25 June 2014

'If you don't come'...... the fear lingers...! But if the waiting goes till eternity, there is hope of an awaited union! Enjoyed!

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 June 2014

Fantastic poem. Beautiful lines.... And time speechless After sweeping up the heart What remains? Love a conjecture And your turning up An uncertainty Until we meet eternity....Loved reading it...

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