Sunday, April 27, 2008

This Poem Is My Worse Effort Comments

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This poem is my worse effort.
I decided to write a 'bad' poem.
Something self contained.
Something from my point of view...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Christine Austin Cole 27 April 2008

Is it better, I wonder, to succeed at trying to be bad than to fail at trying to be good? *laughs* Something to ponder, I suppose. I feel kind of crummy saying I didn't like this - even if I wasn't supposed to. I was raised in one of those 'if you can't find something nice to say houses' and... welp... I have nothing to say. : P With a grin, Christine

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Karen Delta 27 April 2008

Hey it might be your worst effort but its better than anything ive ever come up with! so funny.. really enjoyed reading it

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 27 April 2008

Thank you, William. I wanted this one to reek! Smell. With an intention meant for it to stink like none other!

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