Sunday, August 5, 2012

This Place, My Train Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I do not board this train now,
I am afraid I never will.
This place is beautiful,
this place is all I ever wanted,
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Rachel Henley
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Saadat Tahir 09 August 2012

sad and gripping...kinda lament of the inconsolable...high and low notes...banging piano..blood raising welts on the temple...like a crescendo... the climax comes as a revelation..or more as a confession of sorts.. liked it cheers

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Captain Cur 05 August 2012

This is an excellent poem, which deserves high marks and a ten. wonderful expression of making ones place in the world and seeking out new places and adventures.

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