Tuesday, November 1, 2011

This Passing Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Of this passing time,
A day is certainly very short,
Other times, a minute is so very long.
Living and dreaming..
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Walterrean Salley 05 November 2011

Life is full of irony. And if very brief moments could be longer than long days, then, certainly, it is possible for you to to dream again. The dreams are there simply for the embracing. Dream on. Great job.

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Walterrean Salley 05 November 2011

Life is full of irony. And if very brief moments could be longer than long days, then, certainly, it is possible for you to to dream again. The dreams are there simply for the embracing. Dream on.

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Hans Vr 01 November 2011

I think this is a wonderful poem. I think can follow the flow of thoughts. Fantastic dreams. Keep on dreaming these marvellous dreams and keep putting them in melodious verses as you did. A 10+ from me

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