Monday, July 29, 2013

This Pain Comments

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This pain in my heart
Ruining my life
Forcing me to weep
Giving me no choice but hide behind empty smiles
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Nontobeko Dlamini 19 August 2013

pain, an inevitable part of life but we learn to live with and eventualy overcome as long as we have hope... Great poem.

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Sekharan Pookkat 08 August 2013

Life is a mixture of pains and pleasures- Sort out the pains and make them as our gains

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 29 July 2013

yintoni ngoku mntakwethu? esi sihobe simtoti mara andithandi intokbana uthetha ngentlungu yentliziyo yakho...ndithemba akunto yenzeka ebomini bakho. yomelela if lokhu kwenzeka kuwe. Siya_! !

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Gajanan Mishra 29 July 2013

my joy is nowhere to be found, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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