Friday, June 2, 2023

This Pain Comments

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This pain is not yours to bear,
I'll carry it for you.
I'll hold it close and keep it near,
So you can feel free.
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Ayomikun Akinwunmi
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Bri Edwards 10 June 2023

The rhyming is nice, but I'd reread and think about what you are writing as you are writing it and afterwards. Welcome to PH, 'new poet'. bri ;)

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