Sunday, September 23, 2007

This Ones For You Comments

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You make me smile
As soon as my eyes open
Even if you're not there next to me
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Lu Vernezze
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Brian Mills 23 September 2007

awesome write! ! ! njoy'd TONS! ! ! ! love how you expressed the deep down devotion to the other..........keep inkin' them pages! ! ! Brian

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Daniel Williams 23 September 2007

Very nice. Good poem. Dan.

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Lu Vernezze

Lu Vernezze

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