Last night, walked down the garden
Noticed myriad colors on the rosebushes,
Darling, said mom,
which is for you.
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fragerence of ur poems....is a proud possession of your poetic garden....its refreshing and stimulating.................
what a sweet poem written in dialogue form..wonderful anju...++++++10
some sweet words from Hanque O From: Hanque O (United States ;) To: Anjali Sinha Date Time: 5/15/2009 3: 14: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: 'This One is for Me' This is very sweet, and the ending is happy, it is always happy when the quietest and most subtle ultimately speaks the loudest. A very lovely poem. yours, hanque
It is a Jasmine for your readers...... i am not to comment on the story, ocer all it is a very nice and heart felt and a treatment for tired minds.......10!
what alovely poem and what a lovely choice you made by accepting the simple fellow who was very true....a story there told with utmost beauty
Oh Mom, Give me the flower whose name is selflessness Whose love extend the beyond the love of flesh. Who loves me unconditionally for my sake And will adore me in my sunrise and sunset................. Good Work.................10A++++++++++++
ooooo dear, i envy the lucky lit one... so sweet n cute so tender and u so pretty love..... breeezeee
Amazing Job! ! ! ! Keep up the good work
Praise the Lord, it is beautiful poem which told how much you love of Thee.
perfusing the spectral colors of the mind treasures of a high value - the truest find
i never use to pluck flowers dead flowers have the same fragrance of death...
good insightful write...insightful in more than a couple of ways...your mom should certainly have noticed your message and 'options' there...10
delving into ur mysteries... :) it is imp for all of us... presented well with bful and magical words... :)
Roses are red violets are blue Shakespeare could write and and so can you, love everything this quietly shouts and leaves the reader with wow+++++10 regards Doing this comment in pain, dropped a paving stone on my big toe ooooooow.