Wednesday, December 19, 2012

This One And Only Life Comments

Rating: 4.8

Let your thin and claw like fingers grasp and clutch this life of yours.
Remembering the peaks that briefly forced themselves above the spreading gloom.
The fetus of success, within the mass of your existence, proved to be stillborn.
Go back! go back and drink the pleasure of that dark and succored womb
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Owain Glyn
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Kelvin Owusu 24 December 2012

an excellent excellent piece, a worthy question which noone but the one whom asked the question can answer,

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Lyn Paul 22 December 2012

Anger, Sadness... so well written i feel it all

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Ilaria Boffa 20 December 2012

Life justifies life, whoever we are, whatever we've done. your lucifer even deserves a tear...

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Mountain Pass 20 December 2012

Certainly a very worthy question asked by an entire life form... As a part of it all and a single point of view, I only can add my energy of feeling there will be an revealing answer....Perhaps many times as it is asked over and over and over through many never ending journeys?

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Maggie Munro 19 December 2012

Wow, this one is really powerful, crosslaced with anger and regret, and there is the eternal question for which we have no answer. Love the line about the peaks, very descriptive.

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