Monday, May 25, 2015

This Old Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

This old man named Balco
He lived down the stair
With old fashioned trousers
And thinning white hair
...
Read full text

Robert Smith
COMMENTS
Brian Mayo 20 October 2015

Really good poem- -kept me reading on.

1 0 Reply
Robert Smith 20 October 2015

Thank you Brian, I read through all your poems. Very enjoyable, funny, but to be taken seriously. :)

0 0
Kelly Kurt 25 May 2015

Great poem, Robert. We should honor, respect and learn from our elders

2 0 Reply
Robert Smith

Robert Smith

New York
Close
Error Success