This Night Is Like Comments

a beautiful last line which crowns the poem...10

A simple and sweet write.

sweet really sweet! ! ! :) ++10++\++10++nice work! ! ! :)

mmmmm.........I read and between lines feel I am 1/2 of this equation.10/10

longing and waiting from different points of view. i wish you wrote a longer version and the ending could have been different/sharper.10/10

Good work rahul..Keep it going...God bless you.

a poet does wait for words................ they source......... i do not no.