Wednesday, October 13, 2004

This Newly Loving Game Comments

Rating: 4.2

I had some time this morning that clarified my mind
The thoughts that drifted past me were of a quiet and gentle kind
I'm not saying I'm in love with you, I'm just saying that I find
That thoughts keep drifting past me of a quiet and gentle kind.
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David Keig
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Natalie Malveiro 08 August 2008

Interesting Mr. Keig...is this from personal experience or imagination? ? ? Either way it is a very moving poem......Good luck....keep on keeping on......N.

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Susan Alldred-lugton 12 July 2005

I have come back to this poem again and am impressed by the subtlties expressed in it The subtle nuances surrounding the dilemma of allowing oneself to love and more importnatly to be loved, to premit oneself to be that vulnerable The challenges involved in crossing from the fantasy of being in love to the reality of a more mature love can indeed be formidable tne only tells whter it is worth it Thankyou

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Susan Alldred-lugton 15 March 2005

A beautifully crafted poem about something new I wonder who it is about

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