Monday, June 26, 2017

This New Evening Comments

Rating: 4.0

Whirling at moment of joy,
Day has turned towards time,
New evening has arrived,
Twilight is going to glow.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 May 2023

Let night come in lap of evening, To shine with new stars in sky, Moving upward in right direction, Mind perceived grace of God again....this stanza needs proper organisation and re-arrangement!

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Valsa George 14 December 2020

Evening is a beautiful time of the day! When the last gleams of sunlight fade away, it is time for prayer. We get ready to thank God for all the blessings we have received! Soon night will come with the accompaniment of stars!

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Dogma Daniman 31 October 2020

New evening tells us about many things. We feel beauty and truth. This poem is very interesting. We offer flowers to God through prayer.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 May 2019

Moment of joy! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Pushpendra Patel 02 March 2019

New evening writes joy. Sweet flute of God produces sweet sound for learning. We feel God's love with greatest sweetness. His flute is nice. You are a nice poet and this poem is an excellent poem.

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Hazel Durham 17 September 2018

Stunning, spiritual write that soars and shines in the dark night like God shines and uplifts us eternally!

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Gajanan Mishra 26 June 2017

twilight glow, sir, and nectar flows all around.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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