Whirling at moment of joy,
Day has turned towards time,
New evening has arrived,
Twilight is going to glow.
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Evening is a beautiful time of the day! When the last gleams of sunlight fade away, it is time for prayer. We get ready to thank God for all the blessings we have received! Soon night will come with the accompaniment of stars!
New evening tells us about many things. We feel beauty and truth. This poem is very interesting. We offer flowers to God through prayer.
New evening writes joy. Sweet flute of God produces sweet sound for learning. We feel God's love with greatest sweetness. His flute is nice. You are a nice poet and this poem is an excellent poem.
Stunning, spiritual write that soars and shines in the dark night like God shines and uplifts us eternally!
Let night come in lap of evening, To shine with new stars in sky, Moving upward in right direction, Mind perceived grace of God again....this stanza needs proper organisation and re-arrangement!