Thursday, February 9, 2012

This New Eden Comments

Rating: 4.1

If e`er the human race should die
And I then stood alone
I`d raise my eyes up to the sun
And take him as my own
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Valerie Dohren
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Akhtar Jawad 02 April 2018

This earth would hence become the place Where joy would reign supreme No guns, no bombs, no tears, no hate, This is my greatest dream My your dream come true! A beautiful poem.

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Val Dohren 03 April 2018

Thank you for commenting Akhtar, much appreciated.

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Ken E Hall 17 June 2013

Welcome to your world alas its only an impossible dream..Each breath, each touch, each spoken word In perfect harmony, an echo of your poem..My life has never seen a war free day, never will unless the poets take command...regards

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Joseph Anderson 22 April 2012

A truly classic write, in the style of the past masters. Please pardon my envy-Joe

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Danny Draper 10 March 2012

This fine alternate future for Earth but I believe we are capable of avoiding an apocalypse. A fine write and a great prophetic message with seeds sown for the present to progress our progress.

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Emmanuel Odei Oduro 01 March 2012

Excellent poem. The powers that be owe humankind the singular duty of establishing the New Eden.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 17 February 2012

Perfect, as is the write.

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