Wednesday, July 23, 2008

This Must Be New York! Comments

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THIS MUST BE NEW YORK!
OF GLAMOROUS CITIES
WITH PERFECT BEAUTIES
OF OLD MEMORIES OF GLORIOUS PEOPLE
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Godspower Oshodin
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Carol Rhodes 25 July 2008

Okay, Son, you were right: We were/are fated to share ideas. You see I was born and raised in New York City. Lived in Queens County until I moved to Southern Califfornia by myself. Reading your words, the descriptions, excitement in them, makes me think you may have visited the City. Did you? Because of that upbringing, I am not a friend of big cities, no matter how so-called nice or interesting. The crowds, the withdrawn and separated people on the streets and everywhere else, make for a very lonely restrictive environment, I think. Regardless of my personal slant, you did a beautiful job with this. Carol

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Sandra J. 24 July 2008

I absolutely love this poem!

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