Then You write.......
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Let’s feel free to sing song of love
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Awesome. If everyone share yr idea, Heaven is on earth. tks for sharing
'.............................Godly love Let’s touch this morning sunrays… With our stretched hand in hand Let’s walk free my dear, Go towards unknown shores' very good lines...one must be really fortunate to be friendly with God...good feel, thampi
I Like the following poetic utterace in this piece: Rhythmed by this cool morning and with our heart beats. Let’s feel the caressing breeze and its love…the heart of cool breeze and silence…near for a dear walk
wow! this is a lovely relationship my dear poet.... with your God............Loving and faithful......full mark bhakthi? like Meera with Krishnan.........
this is very exotic..wonderfull..filled with a blend of emotions...
it's nice to read your poem, it is great and lovely~~ keep it up ^^ joni
A beautiful picture of true love Thampi, thankyou so much, you have no idea what this meant to me----Melvina
A tender and touching verse. I like the first part very much because it shows originality and gives insight. Joy of life and love reflected in these lines.
that was good thampi...you have improved so much its unbeleivable...keep it up...nalini
That's so sweet and loving Kee, I like the tenderness in the last line: 'Now we are in bed...and in love'. A picture of surrendering love. I am going to forward this poem to the one I love...Love you Kee, Nibedita.
A beautiful love song to God! Love each line of it! Keep writing dear friend!