Tuesday, September 25, 2018

This Morning Comments

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This morning when sun was hiding in gloom
There arose a throng of cries with doom
I peeped out of the window to check what
Saw a dead crow condoled by crows lot
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Indira Renganathan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 September 2018

Typo....please treat How instead of Who.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 September 2018

Who this morning in a death of crow, the whole crows cried, all trees even looked low pitched, Clouds tore and washed the dead body and Nature held rites rites in commiseration is so movingly painted here. It may be cited.... Clouds gathered fast to clear off the pathos Poured and poured in theirfull compass That dead crow was washed awayvery soon As if by nature's rites in commiseration Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 25 September 2018

Only a poet with a magic touch could transform a trivial looking incident into a poetic masterpiece. This is poignant as well as humane. Thanks, Indira ji.

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