Friday, April 17, 2009

This Moon Light Comments

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Marry me under this moon light,
which is not real.
The only realness of tonight,
Is the realness of my happiness.
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Aylissa Ramirez
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Elizabeth Middleton 20 April 2009

Beautiful! The repetition was just enough to get your point accross and it had mystery that finally revealed a lovely and wholesome message! Very well done!

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