Thursday, June 29, 2006

This Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

This moment on the road
St. Louis to Chicago
on a sunny day,
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Max Reif
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Nimal Dunuhinga 13 July 2006

Itinerary to happiness! What else a human being wants? The moment which goes to past in few seconds.

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Linda Ori 11 July 2006

Well, I liked the poem, but I'm not so sure about the writing while driving scenerio! lol! Your happiness could be shortlived if you aren't careful. (Once a mother, always a mother!) Nice and carefree - Chicago is my kind of town.............. Linda

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Philippa Lane 01 July 2006

'The horizon of the past' - I like that a lot, and I enjoyed the poem. It's good - and am happy that you expressed your own happiness in the moment.

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