The universe is a vast river,
The rain is very cold;
There is no reason to persist:
This moment is forever.
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A most profound write Will. Does the lady still accompany you? Interesting that you wrote this such a long time ago but it still remains timeless. HG: -) xx
Genuinely awesome - dancing with the inexpressible, flowing into and with the divinity of the universe. You've captured something very commanding and also supremely sad in the heart of the forever moment in this, or in the heart of man, Will. Beautiful work. jim
sublime, profound, lyric and wise...what more than this is poetry?
Lady in white walk by the river. I like that line. This is an excellent poem. I hadda givit a ten. God bless all poets-MJG.
Beauty is a timeless mood. Very moving, Will. Kind regards, Sandra
Oh Will, I'm held in the moment and don't want it to end--Lovely_____Melvian
Sadness and beauty are unending. Touched by the fact there is no reason to persist.
Beautifully written Will! I loved the imagery. This moment is forever because you made it last forever with those words. Peace, Aisha