Wednesday, September 6, 2006

This Moment Is Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

The universe is a vast river,
The rain is very cold;
There is no reason to persist:
This moment is forever.
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Will Barber
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Aisha Sherazi 20 June 2007

Beautifully written Will! I loved the imagery. This moment is forever because you made it last forever with those words. Peace, Aisha

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Original Unknown Girl 07 February 2007

A most profound write Will. Does the lady still accompany you? Interesting that you wrote this such a long time ago but it still remains timeless. HG: -) xx

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Not a member No 4 06 February 2007

Genuinely awesome - dancing with the inexpressible, flowing into and with the divinity of the universe. You've captured something very commanding and also supremely sad in the heart of the forever moment in this, or in the heart of man, Will. Beautiful work. jim

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Moon Batchelder 02 October 2006

sublime, profound, lyric and wise...what more than this is poetry?

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Michael Gale 15 September 2006

Lady in white walk by the river. I like that line. This is an excellent poem. I hadda givit a ten. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Sandra Fowler 06 September 2006

Beauty is a timeless mood. Very moving, Will. Kind regards, Sandra

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Melvina Germain 06 September 2006

Oh Will, I'm held in the moment and don't want it to end--Lovely_____Melvian

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Uriah Hamilton 06 September 2006

Sadness and beauty are unending. Touched by the fact there is no reason to persist.

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