Monday, January 16, 2017

This Modern Civilized World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fairness has laid down it's head in the gelatin
In front of the murderer named unfair means,
Standing with a blood stained sword in hand.
Separation, perversion, cruelty and hatred
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Elena Sandu 01 March 2017

Tyranny and oppression are occurring rampant Wearing musk of peace and saint. Seeing how the golden gloves are hiding The cruel and inhuman blood stained pairs of hands! Well said my friend, thank you for sharing, I think these days we are lucky as we have means to share and bring awareness. I am lucky to read your poem and feel the pain of our world and think about change.

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Roseann Shawiak 03 February 2017

Your poem is very poignant and describes our world today so exactingly, you have a great grasp of what is going on today. Your last line was very striking, struck my mind intensely, Little One. Excellent poem of our supposedly civilized world, Amit. Please write more of your thoughts and post them here on ph. I would love to read more of your ideas about life and the living of it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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