Wednesday, January 22, 2014

This Melody Comments

Rating: 4.9

What is this song, this melody,
Which moves me so with tears -
Such gentle words, a sweet refrain,
To soothe away all fears.
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Valerie Dohren
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Patricia Northall 07 March 2014

Val, You have a natural born gift. It is a true blessing. Pat

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Terry M 05 February 2014

While reading this, I had songs of my past dancing in my head. Good one!

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Amitava Sur 04 February 2014

It's a lovely song Valerie - so rhythmic & such a nice flow of words, it freshens me with a fresh mind I read the song again...... touched my heart

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 01 February 2014

It came to mind when I read this beautiful, reflective poem, that this is exactly how a good poem is born. This is the source of that inspiration that we like to call our muse A lovely piece Val.

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Om Chawla 01 February 2014

'A gentle song, a tender song'- - A lyric so very very well sung, Val. Simply beautiful

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Anthony Burkett 26 January 2014

You my dear poet have a gift... and I am ever so grateful to be one of its recipients. Touché to your heart, soul, hand and pen... from which such beautiful melodies flow.

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Sandra Feldman 26 January 2014

I don't know what song you heard but this poem is so melodious and musically pleasant it becomes a song in itself even with out musical instruments. You have managed the musicality of the verse, perfectly.Bravo!

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Dave Walker 24 January 2014

Music is true emotion, a beautiful poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 January 2014

The song will ever live on. Beautiful melodious poem.

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Valsa George 24 January 2014

Such harmony and cadences I’ve never heard before - I deem these sounds ethereal Escaped through heav’ns door. Beauty and music are ever safe in your hands Val.... Lovely! A 10

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Hans Vr 23 January 2014

Excellent fusion of two arts, a melodious poem about music

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Perry Biggerstaff 22 January 2014

Simply incredible. A wonderful reminder of those times that music has overwhelmed me and brought tears to my eyes,

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