Monday, September 11, 2006

This Love That Lies One Sided Comments

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And I,
The traitor that I am
Have not a promise kept,
Nor have the birds flown backwards
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Ben Partenay
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Lauren Michaels 27 September 2006

This is poem is genuinely captivating. Its fit to burst with heart and eloquence. Regards

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Ernestine Northover 12 September 2006

A delightful lilting poem, with a little old fashioned tinge to it. Lovely read and a really nice write. Enjoyed it immensely. Love Ernestine XXX

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Patricia Gale 11 September 2006

Love given but not return to met its fullest... a splendid heart felt read.

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