Thursday, October 4, 2012

This Living Comments

Rating: 5.0

This living, a glass of milk
fresh or stale
smiles and grimace
now im popping champagne
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Peter Maxharya
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Hans Vr 18 November 2012

Wow, this is such a nice poem about the unavoidable ups and downs of life And then, what a great ending. Superb, Leaves the reader with a real good feeling

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Macharia Kanyari 06 November 2012

Perfect execution in ryme and theme. Cheers!

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