Saturday, March 4, 2006

This Little Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

She huddles against the dirty wall
hugging it ever so tight;
hopeing that he will choose not to do
the things, he did last night.
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Ruth warren
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Brittany Hill 04 March 2006

This poem is very emotional and serious. I've known people in this situation and it's hard to say these words because it hurts so much. GOOD JOB

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Charles M Moore 04 March 2006

Well phrased difficult subject to write about. well done Charlie.

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Charles Chaim Wax 04 March 2006

the grievous harm done to an innocent child made real the grief tangible no play this with a curtain to end the torment just life a fine poem

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