Friday, May 29, 2009

This Life Of Mine Comments

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this life of mine....just like trees
with happy moments falling like dead leaves
with problems like roots.... branching out
when i get cut down...i just scream and shout
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Sneha Murali
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Kee Thampi 22 February 2010

the shadows...my own..chasing me i can't even run..it's dark...i cannot see nicely a philosophy made in words

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Afzal Shauq 30 May 2009

this life of mine....it's just a joke..love the repetation of this line and its making the poem very charming and melodious... you added more poems... well don i will be happy when my dear friend never forget to add new poem each day... respect your long commments... you are really kind and good 10 +++++++

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Shekhar Joshi 29 May 2009

this life of mine....well...it's no life.. if there's no joy...only struggle and strife and i always thought life is all about struggles and strives.......

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