This Life Mysterious Comments

Great stuff, William... brilliantly crafted and powerfully stated. I don't think the ending could have been better. Well done! ! Brian

Exceptional write! There is both wisdom and beauty in abundance expressed here. This is definately a world class poem. Kindest regards, Sandra

Echo the comments below - a difficult subject to pen properly but you have done so here. Thanks

hey william, its so true and i wonder how tough it must have been for you to pen it down coz when life's llike this you are almost blank about anything and everything around you.. an indeed a splendid piece.. smiles, krishna

Wiliam, I enjoyed the structure of this piece, and its flow. I applaud your sentiments and admire your style. Sincerely, Alison

I think you're manifesting your truths with this beautiful poem, Will. Wonderful perspective into life's both positive and negative aspects. We muddle through and just do the best we can - and 'every now and then a little light shines through.' Linda

Hi William took a break on the site, but I do come and read. It are so right. Life is a mystery. I too am going through the same right now. It is hard. I really understand how you feel.

'This Life Mysterious' and yet we are the conduits by which change is recognized! I view your resolve. Although there is an admitted reluctance to accept the complexity of man's 'evolution'. Nice depiction and well written, William! L