This Life Is Hard But I Go On Comments

I am on a difficult life and am trying to be strong but i failMy Mom talled me shocking news:

i am happy to wrestle the memories of my life's tribulations but i am not at all happy to face more tribulations in my life.Great poem.Thank you

Looking out from mind eye, to the blue sky afar positively. Determination arising from the bottom of heart nicely expressed. Very impressive. Poem deserves popularity it earned. Thanks for sharing

I am free and fly my wings, Appreciating every thing, ....... good notion to be a good citizen but at the same time something should be granted as not appreciable.

'I kneel down and count my blessings, For sometimes life is distressing.' Happy as I am, those two lines just made me cringe. .

So much inspiration in your wonderful words. So so glad I have read these words. Thank you Victoria I hope everyone gets to share this write.

Touching poem filled with positivity....Very true said..Upon my bravery I do stand. Thanks for sharing.

Needs work on the line length, the rumpy-dumpy rhythm doesn`t fit the subject..

good poem...I like the courageous attitude...

One among Many Who decided, and for what reason only one tile should be a picture tile Bearing the image of a single flower all the others stare barefaced in envy Could it be, that this ceramic square above the sink is a mistake one short of the job perhaps Even the adhesive rejects its presence trying to force it off from behind In the event of it loosing grip and falling dashing its pretty face on the hard cold floor it would finish up as many rough-edged pieces Maybe there is another like it hidden within the row of cubicles along the wall Perhaps the tile does not wish to be different longing only to be without charge But to wish that it is removed is to ask that it be broken

Some excellent lines, great positive write

Upon my bravery I do stand. Very good. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

broken memories of lovely world Through broken glass and faded dreams, I find a place where I can scream, This pain is huge and takes me over, I cannot smell the scent of clover,