This Life Comments

i like this poem... very nice ending. keep it up.

wow....great thoughts...amazing phrases...amazing write as a whole very touching....inspiring.... love moves in mysterious ways...and it was happening to you.....great... keep on writing justin.._maia_

This has something to do with your painful past, right? Nice poem and a powerful affection. Your pain is something many people go through. The difference is you go with it every day while some peoples' last about a day or so. It's a good thing someone cares for you, gives you strength to live THIS LIFE. God bless you.

i understand ur pain, i go through the pain every day since the day i was born. Its good that ur free, i wish i could be. Great poem, keep up the good work. ~victoria~