Monday, March 31, 2008

This Lama's Not For Riding Comments

Rating: 5.0

I felt it slip though my fingers
It seared my skin yet I felt no pain
And, as it fell to the floor
I heard it groan like a wounded animal
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david stansfield
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Philip Housiaux 18 May 2008

Unusually poigant writing - very confident writer to adopt such unorthodox form relying upon profundity of thought expressed to hold piece together as a poem. Very good work.

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