Monday, July 13, 2020

This July Sadness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flooded thoroughly
By torrential warming rains
Virus greets mourning
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Virus greets mourning. Great...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 July 2020

Mourning along! ! Rain to wash away our sins on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 July 2020

A masterfully crafted composition. Simply marvelous...10+++

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Anjandev Roy 13 July 2020

.....greets mourning......significant.....thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Michael Walkerjohn 13 July 2020

Aloha Mahtab and Cheers! Natural nurturing cycles, the yearly soon', memory of passing souls, the expected across generations; and now what else could have been expected historically? When humanity makes a mess of both itself and nature... humanity earns death... an unnaturally suspect circumstance this time round though... Fine Senryu Friend! All of the best from this life, to you, and to all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 July 2020

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Aarzoo Mehek 13 July 2020

This too shall pass.... Faith power works.

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 13 July 2020

virus greets mourning.....the underpinned message is wonderful

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