sometimes i feel so happy,
sometimes i am kind of sad,
at times i hang by a thread,
somtimes i am soaked glad,
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No human being is ugly.......only evil is ugly. Your poem really strongly reminds me of Eminem's 'The Way I Am'.... you should listen to it sometime. Anyway, great poem - don't let anyone change you.........too much conforming takes place in the world anyway. ok take care, - Dona -
I like your point here Abdul. It's a wonderful thing to be proud of who we are and not let others shake our foundation. It's nice that you feel such pride at such a young age. Good for you! Sincerely, Mary
Who you are is the most important. this one's nice. but like tara said, you needn't swear cause atleast you know who you are unlike many others out there who got no clue about it. Preets
This is who you are... laid bare for all to see.. but not. Despite myself I rather like this. But don't swear, young man.
An insightful introspective piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. Brave utterances elegantly brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Abdul.