This Is What You Do To Your Life! Comments

A very thought-provoking one, indeed. It made me indulge in self-introspection.

A very different write, but good! Thought provoking. Well done

very nice narrative poem, thank you for sharing

They will give you unlimited love, They will certainly understand. And your life will smile, You can’t imagine, with a lovely flare, And successes will come beside Like a very close friend. An especially beautiful conclusion to the final stanza. This is what true friends and the beautiful people always give.

'Like a very close friend? ' is it possible? i thinknot n hope not but its good be positive. keep it up. 10+

A very nice joke and then followed by some very wise words for all your readers to think about. A very good write. Lynn

Nice blonde joke to start with, followed by a great wisdom. I agree very much with all that wisdom, If we are rally caring, we will have peace of mind and that is what deep inside counts most. Keep it up Amrit, you are really writing lots and lots of wisdom in your poems. Thanks a lot.

A moral poem with a good example. Well done.

Impressive narrative poem - with a great message to ponder

You explained the irony of life very nicely by using an example at the very start....I truly agree with your words

you know I REALLY like this one- such a valuable lesson- 'This is the irony! If you care With open heart and mind to share, Your happiness, your sorrows, Your humility, our cares, Your compassion, And your help, They will give you unlimited love, ' This is so true and expressed so well- I love the example you give at the beginning about the blond with the car and standing in the circle, etc. Great imagination in expressing a lesson that should be of value to anyone! Great job- you know you write VERY well, with your unique style- many of your poems tell a story- I like that- it makes them very readable and wanting to read more! Keep up the good work! - Claudia

'You can’t imagine, with a lovely flare, And successes will come beside Like a very close friend.' I liked these lines very much. The idea of success being personified is very good.

'Every time you weren't looking, I stepped outside the circle! - such a keen observation on human character. Dear, I just love your write up.