Tuesday, October 15, 2013

This Is What Life Is... Comments

Rating: 4.8

There are so many things I do
that I do not want to do
There are so many things I want to do
that I am not doing
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Spellshifter Poetry
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Elena Sandu 24 October 2014

Thank you for sharing, great poem revealing a painful trruth: adopting behaviors they provoked adopting their 'dreams' as mine accepting blind fears as facts of the future educated for failure forced to betray and abandon myself this is what life is and has been, I think, at least for most of us

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 October 2014

This poem is all about the inertia of the human mind..nicely ye explained in a poetic form thank you and congrats for the selection as Poem of The Day from a Member and the poem deserved for

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Karen Sinclair 24 October 2014

This is what I call poetry. The two other poems of the day, I read, have not evoked much in me but this, this captures the fruits of my subconscious. It's beautiful, honest and perfectly placed. The subject matter is one we all consider but not normally with this much clarity.

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Alistair Graham 24 October 2013

Most of us most of the time live other people’s lives from within our own skin

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Babatunde Aremu 24 October 2013

Nice poem. We are sometimes between two divides, that's life

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