The day i die,
Is the day i leave this all behind;
The day when i leave this all behind,
Is the day i say goodbye;
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Emotion floods this poem and washes over it's readers. Good job!
wow i really love this one very dark feeling of how relationships turn and how people wont try to change til its to late or wont notice someone til they're gone.... but young love aint worth it :)
That was good one Chrishtiana (am i spell it right lol) , in a repetitive one you share non repetitive emotion, but all just bitter sweet and it sum all as a nice writing, keep it up Cheers_Unwritten Soul
You 're talented keep on writing what u feel.. cuz that is the best at u :)
this poem was good and sometimes its better late than never my uncle always use to say stuff and i never listened to him but now he is gone and those sayings are all i have so they keep me motivated
its like your telling the story of a part of my life your talented
Great talent Christina!