Tuesday, November 3, 2009

This Is True Please Read And Don'T Walk Down Streets Alone! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking....
Down the depths of a dark street alone, to go home.
Listening....
To the people around me arguing and laughing.
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Dee RAAIN
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Eyan Desir 05 November 2009

Nice poem, good flow....tell me the names of these ppl I will get them for you

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Simply Crazy 04 November 2009

love, love, loved it! seriously, this is very good. i like how you have the verb... then everything else. very well written. def. kept me reading. wondering what was going to happen. excellent!

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Emerald Eyes 03 November 2009

OMG! ! i love iht... Didi thias really happen.. if it did..so sorry.. LOVE iht soooo descriptive too.. its like everystep something new

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The Devils Girl 03 November 2009

Omg I loved it. The poem was great. I loved that it caught my eye as soon as I started to read it. I'm sorry if this sounds weird to you. but you are really good. if u would please read some of my poems i would like to know wat u think. and i hope to god this never happened to u.

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Troy Clark 03 November 2009

Did this really happen? I'm sorry if it did.

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