Walking....
Down the depths of a dark street alone, to go home.
Listening....
To the people around me arguing and laughing.
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love, love, loved it! seriously, this is very good. i like how you have the verb... then everything else. very well written. def. kept me reading. wondering what was going to happen. excellent!
OMG! ! i love iht... Didi thias really happen.. if it did..so sorry.. LOVE iht soooo descriptive too.. its like everystep something new
Omg I loved it. The poem was great. I loved that it caught my eye as soon as I started to read it. I'm sorry if this sounds weird to you. but you are really good. if u would please read some of my poems i would like to know wat u think. and i hope to god this never happened to u.
Nice poem, good flow....tell me the names of these ppl I will get them for you