Tuesday, November 24, 2020

This Is The World I Want To Live In Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to live in a world,
where I can smile,
I want to live in a world,
where I can cry,
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Maria Mitea
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Koffi B Sossou 30 October 2023

How shall we live in that perfect world when divisions arise from everywhere? Religion, race, tribe, identity...

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Koffi B Sossou 30 October 2023

Here is the thing. The more you expect from people, the more you hurt yourself.

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Koffi B Sossou 30 October 2023

The desire is perfect, but the reality is different.

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Thomas Case 05 March 2023

superb poem Maria

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Rob Lamberton 11 December 2022

Kindness and compassion make for a great world. Thank you sharing from the heart!

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Indira Renganathan 02 July 2022

Let us all look forward to really a happily united world where we meet good people only to give and take happiness and peace alone...5*****

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C N Premkumar 24 March 2022

Laughing together and crying together... Yes it is still a different world we dream. All are slf centred and have no time for seeing the tears or smile of another person. Beautiful poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 August 2021

A fantastic dream translated into a beautiful poem. But, there is a saying in my mother tongue, Malayalam: When you smile there would be lot of people to smile with you, to share your happiness. But when you cry, you cry alone." I think this saying is there in every language.

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M Asim Nehal 08 March 2021

Profound, we all wish to live in a world that cares, we wish to share our joy and happiness and stand besides holding hands in sorrows. Some live the dreams and some the realities. Thoughtful poem. Full *****

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Thomas Case 26 January 2021

Love this

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Anjandev Roy 30 November 2020

Sublime piece...........thank u.......anjandev roy.

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Maria Mitea 30 November 2020

Thank you, Anjandev for reading! I deeply appreciate you reading and writing a comment!

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 November 2020

I want to live in a world, where I can smile, I want to live in a world, where I can cry, i want to be free i want to be myself. i shall never be a slave of anyone. fine thoughts. tony

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Maria Mitea 29 November 2020

Thank you, Dr T! I deeply appreciate you reading and supporting it!

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Maria Mitea 29 November 2020

Thank you Dr T! I deeply appreciate you reading and writing a comment!

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Chinedu Dike 24 November 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, a beautiful creation.

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Maria Mitea 29 November 2020

Thank you, Chinedu! I deeply appreciate you reading and supporting it with your comment!

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Lyn Paul 24 November 2020

A shared smile is joy and the most incredible feeling, like a breathe of life. We need more. I too want this world. May we all share a smile today and every single day after that. Thank you Maria. Keep smiling.

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Maria Mitea 29 November 2020

I will, Lyn! Thank you for reading and writting back!

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Richard Wlodarski 24 November 2020

This too shall happen. And we're very close to it happening. The pandemic will change us for the better. Beautiful poem, Maria!

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Maria Mitea 29 November 2020

I deeply appreciate your time and writing a comment, R! All my gratitute!

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Maria Mitea 29 November 2020

Thank you, R! I deeply appreciate you reading and supporting it with your comment!

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Leeann Azzopardi 24 November 2020

Yes, I want this also! Bravo! Bravo!

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Maria Mitea 29 November 2020

Thank you for reading and writing back, L!

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