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My hand glides across your bedroom wall as I dim the lights,
The shadows hiding in your mind, body and heart,
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Amazing! ! ! ! such a wonderful feel! ! ! ! ! Really a fine piece! ! ! ! top markssss
Bravo! Kyle! A reservoir of penning thoughts and rich imagery filtered in this well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Your talent is clearly shown in this write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!
comparing eyes with arrows i liked. in a very passionate way it is well done
Wow this is so good,10+ You are a great poet, Better than me... Which of coursed everybody is better than me
very well written. it is wonderous no words or phrases throw off others.its amazing
A well written poem, an energetic grace i found in it, Thank you author for the dynamic expression, keep writing.Happy 2009 Wishes,
Wow......beautiful poem heh. As always. I kinda got a weird feeling from reading it hmm..... Anyways i love ya -Tyease P.S-Hmm.....i wonder who inspired you.... =]
a nice piece of poetry good imagery enjoyed