Friday, December 26, 2008

This Is The Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

This is the part of the poem where Things like love
Start
My hand glides across your bedroom wall as I dim the lights,
The shadows hiding in your mind, body and heart,
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Heather Wilkins 10 August 2014

a nice piece of poetry good imagery enjoyed

0 0 Reply
Heather Wilkins 10 August 2014

a nice piece of poetry good imagery enjoyed

0 0 Reply
Heather Wilkins 10 August 2014

a nice piece of poetry good imagery enjoyed

0 0 Reply
Vipins Puthooran 04 August 2012

Amazing! ! ! ! such a wonderful feel! ! ! ! ! Really a fine piece! ! ! ! top markssss

0 0 Reply
Romeo Della Valle 15 July 2012

Bravo! Kyle! A reservoir of penning thoughts and rich imagery filtered in this well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Your talent is clearly shown in this write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

0 0 Reply
Emma Adamyan 31 October 2009

comparing eyes with arrows i liked. in a very passionate way it is well done

0 0 Reply
Makayla Straight 07 July 2009

Wow this is so good,10+ You are a great poet, Better than me... Which of coursed everybody is better than me

0 0 Reply
Jaci Burns 13 May 2009

very well written. it is wonderous no words or phrases throw off others.its amazing

0 0 Reply
Vinod Kumar 01 January 2009

A well written poem, an energetic grace i found in it, Thank you author for the dynamic expression, keep writing.Happy 2009 Wishes,

0 0 Reply
Tyease Collins 26 December 2008

Wow......beautiful poem heh. As always. I kinda got a weird feeling from reading it hmm..... Anyways i love ya -Tyease P.S-Hmm.....i wonder who inspired you.... =]

0 0 Reply
Kyle Jones

Kyle Jones

Tegucigalpa: Honduras: Carribean
Close
Error Success