This Is The Poem Without Words Comments

Nice man! now you know you can please do it; and keep on encouraging others to do the same.

wish they is words lol this is good

hey i really like what you have done with this poem. alot of empathy for the person you are writing about. you tell his story well. Thanks for sharing. keep writing it takes time to improve but all you need is a sincere and enthusiastic love of writing to achieve what you want with it. and it doesen't hurt to read alot to.

as you said dat i must read yo poems im on the path now man. by reading ol thiz poems there is an assantial lesson and strategies i capture from them.u realy have the potantial of writting&skills, so we have to work together as u are farmilier with our plan and ensure that our wok is approximately on high level.muhle umsenbenzi wakho mfowethu jelouse down...go high

Very great poem, powerful and shown. And just like Waseem; the title is very catchy. Keep up the good work :)