This Is The Place: (Modern Purgatory) Comments

Thanks Shaun...yes I'm pretty pleased with this one...I'm pleased you appreciate it. I feel that it is a daming indictment of certain aspects of modern existence.

Excellent all round! A superb poem that ticks all the boxes. A poem hitting the ground running from its interesting beginning, to its most sublime closing line. Loved it! 10++. Thank you Dominic for again weaving fine original poetry quality and take care.