Wednesday, November 26, 2014

This Is The Only Story Of Life Comments

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Desire of man none measurable to measure,
More sweat than toil to get the life's pleasure,
Ditched to the evil mire, compelled for willy-silly,
And slowly caged within the fantasy of willy-nilly,
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Salini Nair 28 November 2014

wonderfully crafted poem........................nice

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2014

This is only the life and we suffer due to m ore and more desires which remain unfulfilled or fulfilled. Nicely penned thought provoking poem shared on. Each line expresses reality about life. Nice job.

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Don Nguyen 26 November 2014

Provoking poem. Thanks. We make our own fate unless we leave our destiny in the hand of God. We suffer for a purpose if we know why we are willing to suffer. Between life and death, we ought to offer the buffer called love.

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