In life sometimes you're up
sometimes you're down
sometimes you win
sometimes you loose you crown
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This is life...some poems are good some poems are bad Yours are good
a great write of the evolution of life....well presented, , , great job...
nice poem listing all the ups and downs in life... In life sometimes you feel law sometimes you feel high i think it should be ' low ' instead of law....
life is every thing and seldom nothing you better explain it well lola nice poem you too visit my poetry luwi
I like the way you listed everything in life. It made me think alot about life. Great Job!
sweet and quite meaningful...really a good poem