Friday, July 10, 2009

This Is The Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

In life sometimes you're up
sometimes you're down
sometimes you win
sometimes you loose you crown
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lola hi l
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Afzal Shauq 19 April 2010

sweet and quite meaningful...really a good poem

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&&angel4ever && 04 August 2009

nice words and idea...........light theme

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sky dreams 28 July 2009

very meaningful poem, speaks nothing but truth.. good write =)

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Henry Brown 18 July 2009

This is life...some poems are good some poems are bad Yours are good

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Ency Bearis 13 July 2009

a great write of the evolution of life....well presented, , , great job...

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Anjali Sinha 13 July 2009

very beautiful nicely penned anjali

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Bele Lele 11 July 2009

so true! keep up the good work

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Steven Pimentel 11 July 2009

great.. keep doing your thing your qood

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nice poem listing all the ups and downs in life... In life sometimes you feel law sometimes you feel high i think it should be ' low ' instead of law....

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Luwi Habte 10 July 2009

life is every thing and seldom nothing you better explain it well lola nice poem you too visit my poetry luwi

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Becky Kellington 10 July 2009

I like the way you listed everything in life. It made me think alot about life. Great Job!

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