Friday, July 31, 2009

This Is Our World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Didn't families once stand together?
Promise to stand hand-in-hand forever?
Now our generation stands in isolation.
A kind of family of our invention.
...
Read full text

Ashley Mejia
COMMENTS
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 August 2009

They care but they need to survive before they could even help others.This is our world now, Ashley.

0 0 Reply
sky dreams 01 August 2009

I love this one... stands for nothing but truth... its heartaching to see the way children are discarded as if they are pieces of garbage.. the world is an unfair and scary place, its a 'make or break' world, and no matter how strong you are sometimes it still manages to take you down.... great poem 10

0 0 Reply
Ashley Mejia

Ashley Mejia

Puerto Rico
Close
Error Success