Monday, April 28, 2008

This Is Not Right Comments

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You may as well reveal it,
When the time comes
For it to be revealed.
Concealing misdeeds done,
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Ernestine Northover 28 April 2008

How right you are Lawrence, very cleverly woven poem, and it says it all. Regret eats into the soul. Enjoyed reading this one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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~ Jon London ~ 28 April 2008

A very true and important message, your creation points to this with such excellence...great work...I enjoy reading your work, Thanks for sharing all the very best my friend J.L

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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