Saturday, August 20, 2011

This Is My World Comments

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This is my world, high on this mountain.
The wind whispers to me, constantly.
It is so peaceful here, so quiet,
I am one with the desert all around me.
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Juan Olivarez
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Smoky Hoss 23 August 2011

So many lines in this amazing poem reach out to me, but especially '... never in my life have I felt such peace...', right on, I have felt it also in the desert red-rock country of southern Utah. Thanks for the memory your poem stirred up. May we all by God's grace return to where we belong.

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Wendy Thopliss 20 August 2011

This mountain of yours sounds so lovely and peaceful Juan. It could almost be heaven, Lovely read.

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