Thursday, February 21, 2013

'This Is My Prayer To Thee' Comments

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Make me a flower
delicate and sweet, spewing fragrance
into the blowing breeze.
Make me a violin
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2018

This is a beautiful devotional prayer having the wishing of universal welfare and humanity. I quote... Let the land be watered Let the dirt be cleansed Let the Earth wear a celestial charm Thank for sharing this valuable poem with us.

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Simone Inez Harriman 02 July 2017

A beautiful poem written by a beautiful person. Thank you Valsa for this stunning poem....10+ and straight to my favorites.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 November 2016

Depths of gloom! ! With the beams of light. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bri Edwards 19 July 2016

did YOU really write this? ? why would i doubt it? marvelous flow and words. some would say spectacular! bri :) though on the 'religious side', i'll send this to MyPoemList. hee-hee

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Akhtar Jawad 24 November 2014

Sweetness, melody and beauty, three in one and one in three..............10

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Kavya . 01 March 2013

wat a beautiful prayer and hats off to your imaginations too.....May God fulfil all your wishes

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Neela Nath Das 22 February 2013

A prayer full of sanctity and innocence.Complete devotion to God gives us peace of mind.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 22 February 2013

Such exalted thoughts in your wonderful Prayer to God ! .I am at a loss to describe my deep feelings that clutch me on reading this sacred poem of yours.THANKS.

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