Thursday, October 27, 2011

This Is My Paradise Comments

Rating: 3.0

</>In his eyes
I see a beauty….all that is wonderful in this world
I get lost in his eyes
His smiles melt my heart like no other
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Wendee Isaacs
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Benjamin Paa Willie 28 October 2011

good work. all the best in your endeavors.

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Carolyn Brunelle 27 October 2011

This has a nice rhythm and flow to it Wendy. Write On!

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